the over song seems very out of beat, if not random. you should work on your song structures. I dont mean that in a mean way. its just throwing me off wayy too much.
What Eggs808 said, it is a bit trippy. i wasn't feeling much of the drums the melody makes me dizzy. maby makig the song a slower tempo and making the melody a little less dizzy feeling might do the trick!
Could use work
Hmm needs alot more work imo, The beat is too simple for the sample, the preloaded loops plus the constant sample make ths song a bit annoying. Maby adding more vocal samples or a different type of drum pattern would make it a bit less repeitive. maby even lowering the sample pitch could do the trick.
I did not make this too serious, just to bother. I was playing with the sample, added a beat & thats it. Nothing to serious. It would kinda be hard to make a real song with that sample...
I feel it can be mixed abit better. Theres one beginning around :23 secs thats kinda threw me off and also the lazer sound is a bit annoying imo, maby if you lowered the lazer and blending in the music more it would have been mind blowing.
Sword of mana my brother
not dbz or ffa
Would you mind if I give a shot at making a flash for this?
go right ahead!
thanks for the review!
Dude Im telling you
We gotta collabo one of these days.
Yo gotta ask u somthing.
Me and another emcee are making a "bring hip hop back" demo tape. I like your style, you wanna hop on a track?
yeah dude deffinitly
im down :-D
Can I use this beat? Me and another emcee are making a demo tape to bring hio hop back. I enjoy this beat & i garruente you that we will do this beat justice.
i didnt make the beat, it's by a dude Kajmir Royale, but dude, hip hop isnt dead!!! there's a million artists out there, hip hop is very much alive
yo, should make a remix.
Very dope beat, the hook's echo throws me off. The flows of the verses were ieght, nothing really new from what I normally hear. I wouldnt mind throwing a verse if wanted. Pm me so I can show u some of my old stuff, I can use my friends pro mic.
aiight man ill let JE know about you wantin to spit a verse in it and ill tell you if itll go down. keep it real man, peace!!!
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