*dizzy*
the over song seems very out of beat, if not random. you should work on your song structures. I dont mean that in a mean way. its just throwing me off wayy too much.
*dizzy*
the over song seems very out of beat, if not random. you should work on your song structures. I dont mean that in a mean way. its just throwing me off wayy too much.
Hmm...
What Eggs808 said, it is a bit trippy. i wasn't feeling much of the drums the melody makes me dizzy. maby makig the song a slower tempo and making the melody a little less dizzy feeling might do the trick!
~Grin~n
Could use work
Hmm needs alot more work imo, The beat is too simple for the sample, the preloaded loops plus the constant sample make ths song a bit annoying. Maby adding more vocal samples or a different type of drum pattern would make it a bit less repeitive. maby even lowering the sample pitch could do the trick.
~Grin~
I did not make this too serious, just to bother. I was playing with the sample, added a beat & thats it. Nothing to serious. It would kinda be hard to make a real song with that sample...
Hmm...
I feel it can be mixed abit better. Theres one beginning around :23 secs thats kinda threw me off and also the lazer sound is a bit annoying imo, maby if you lowered the lazer and blending in the music more it would have been mind blowing.
~Grin~
Dude Im telling you
We gotta collabo one of these days.
Ayo
Can I use this beat? Me and another emcee are making a demo tape to bring hio hop back. I enjoy this beat & i garruente you that we will do this beat justice.
i didnt make the beat, it's by a dude Kajmir Royale, but dude, hip hop isnt dead!!! there's a million artists out there, hip hop is very much alive
yo, should make a remix.
Very dope beat, the hook's echo throws me off. The flows of the verses were ieght, nothing really new from what I normally hear. I wouldnt mind throwing a verse if wanted. Pm me so I can show u some of my old stuff, I can use my friends pro mic.
aiight man ill let JE know about you wantin to spit a verse in it and ill tell you if itll go down. keep it real man, peace!!!
-Jersey Endless
Incredible.
All I wanna say is that this beat speaks to me. If it would be ok with you that I would make a song outta this beat? I would rap about bringing True Hip-hop back. Nothing ignorant nor stupid. this is one of thoese beats where I could problay give it my all on. P.M. me back ok?
~GRIN~
send lyrics please =D
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